Hi Tony,
you did a great detailed painting! as I said in the comments with all your hard work on barn, the barn itself need to be the star of the painting.
I only assumed that and do not know what your intention actually was.
Your story might have gone two ways either/or:
1) painting is about mountains
2) painting is about barn
Original painting with awesome details:
Suggested adjustments to tell the story about the barn better:
Cheers,
sunnylady
That is a huge improvement Sunny. Let the star of the show shine in the spotlight :)
I just may have to try this one again ;)